CloudyPages's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Color Of Loss, COTM, MDragonPB]

LOVE the use of colors here!

[Is This Motivation Enough]

I know theres a whole big illustration to look at but i cant stop looking at the motivational poster top right corner, its just so morbid. I happen to weirdly love morbid things and this picture made me laugh and get disturbed at the same time. Needs a little work on anatomy, good solid coloring, colors compliment each other, for some reason its just really easy to look at and i cant tell if its the colors or what. one big problem is that you were a day late, the deadline was the 19th sorry, maybe next time though

XEJD responds:

actually no, the drawing itself was finished before, not to mention you neglected to think of people who live in a time zone a whole day behind i do. i uploaded on Monday the 18th, even if it was a couple minutes after midnight, there where problems uploading this on the sight that nothing to do with me, and even then it still means i got it on the deadline date, not after. however, thank you for your concern. :]

[Elf Motivation]

The concept and art is really good but this is digital, not traditional.

MatthewAllen responds:

Thank you! I drew it all on paper scanned it on the computer and colored it in on Photoshop, so its like a mix.

[Elfmotavation]

Its really good for a paper drawing and the coloring is really clean and nice to look at but its hard to read it when the picture's sideways and youre holding the picture. All you need to do is take a picture of the paper up close and by itself, then rotate it so we can read it better. And you might want to add a work in progress piece so that you dont get disqualified.

[The Teddy Bears' Picnic]

Beautifully horrifying and funny in a twisted way, i really like it

ZacDoodles responds:

Thanks, I really like your piece too!

[COTM November 2017 B-UNDERTHESURFACE]

Its a beautiful piece but I dont see how it fits in with under the surface

[In the trenchcoat]

Oh my gosh this is so adorable!

[Dear Lie The Bride]

This creeps me out, not only because for some reason theres a bride in a coffin but also I cant help but think of what my dead relatives look like now. It looks awesome, great job, best of luck.

[Neither is the Happier]

Whoa, the effects on this piece are really dazzleing and it tells a story, i would suggest making better use of space though because theres a lot of empty room for your eyes to wander but other than that its really pleasing to look at. Best of luck :)

Marckel responds:

Thank you for the review! I'm glad you liked it! My intention for the empty spaces is to trick the viewer into thinking all three parts of the image are separate, but yes, I should've used a better composition or at least emphasized more on the main middle scene which should've been a focal point.